Feel the rain

Quick came the uninvited guest,

Crashing at the gravel.

Hurried knocks on the door,

Along came the carol.

Thrashing was the thunderbolt,

Never seizing to startle.

Drips of crystals,

Dangling from heaven,

Of a vacationing Sun,

Croaking frogs and seagulls.

‘ Some people feel the rain,

Others just get wet. ‘





  1. ewellnessexpert · May 17, 2016

    Well written Sara. Rain is an uninvited guest. Thanks for sharing.

    • Sara · May 17, 2016

      Glad you liked it! Thank you.

  2. M Chaillot · May 18, 2016

    Oh my, this is marvelous! I especially LOVE: “drips of crystals dangling from heaven”–gorgeous phrasing/imagery!

    • Sara · May 18, 2016

      Thank you so much, Chaillot ! Means a lot.

  3. mySestina · May 18, 2016

    now that’s fun… some people feel the rain, others just get wet…

    • Sara · May 18, 2016

      Yea! Thanks for stopping by 🙂

  4. Cezane & Michelle · May 18, 2016

    Lovely, the last lines were utterly splendid! – Cezane

    • Sara · May 18, 2016

      That is the power of Bob Marley! Thanks.

  5. Simon · September 15

    Love it!

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